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Monday, January 30, 2012

Chapter 17-2

You've been in and out of consciousness for almost a week now, Almonihah. Don't overdo it,” the elf said, concern evident in his tone and voice.


“A week?” Almonihah rasped. He could vaguely remember a few brief moments of consciousness, but a week?


Imlloen nodded. “You're lucky you crashed close enough to a Ranger that he heard you. I don't think you would have made it if Aled hadn't gotten to you immediately, though you owe at least as much to Brynmor.”


Almonihah started to nod, then decided against it as tilting his head made the world start to spin. He laid back down. Brynmor was a Druid, and the official healer for the Rangers at the Northern Ranger Headquarters. From what he remembered, he probably had needed the Druid's help badly when they found him.


“Speaking of Brynmor,” the Ranger Commander said, standing and walking toward the door, “He'll want to know you're up.”


Almonihah took stock of himself while Imlloen was out of the room. He seemed to be all in one piece, and though he was vaguely sore... everywhere, really, it seemed he could move everything. Including the wings that were still on his back. Which made him notice that laying on his back, even with the pains whoever had laid him here had obviously taken, was not particularly comfortable any more. He tried sitting up, slowly this time, and with considerable support from the wall the bed he was on was pushed up against.


By the time he'd gotten himself situated somewhat comfortably, Imlloen came back in with Brynmor. The Druid rushed over to his patient.


“What are you sitting up for? You...”


“'t's too uncomfortable t' lay on these,” Almonihah interrupted, moving his wings slightly to indicate what he was referring to.


Brynmor shook his head. “I still don't think it's a good idea yet, but,” he sighed, “I suppose it's too late now. Now then, let's check things over.”


Almonihah endured in silence as the Druid poked and prodded some particular points on his limbs, and especially on his wings. “You had a number of broken bones when we found you,” he explained to his patient as he did so. “It seems like Naishia's blessings have done their work, though. It was...” he fell silent for a moment, then said, his tone a bit more subdued, “Something... resisted me at first. For a time, it seemed I might not be able to do anything for you.”


The half-dragon grunted in acknowledgement. “Stayed out there too long,” he muttered.


Imlloen sighed. “I'd thought we'd lost you earlier, but I can't say I was happy to see you when you were carried in. Not like you were.” He was silent for a long moment, then said, “But it's good to have you back now.”


“You're probably hungry,” Brynmor interjected. “I have just the thing... be back in a moment...” he went back out the door.


Imlloen watched him leave, then turned back to Almonihah. “Feel up to telling me what happened?” He asked, quietly.


The half-dragon grunted. “Yeah, th' short version.”


Imlloen sat back down, attentive. Almonihah considered for a moment, then started, “Th' Madlands 're a lot bigger than they were in Falloen's time. Took me three times 's long t' get to th' Desolation of the Dragonfall 's he did.”


The elf narrowed his eyes, but said nothing. After a moment's pause, Almonihah continued, “Ran out 'f supplies. Had t' eat or die.” He shrugged very slightly. “Just about died anyway.”


The room was silent for a minute or two before he added, softly, “His voice is in the wind down there. Jivenesh's. Didn't know what it was at first, but after I ate even that one meal...”


It was quiet again in the room. After another few moments, Brynmor came back in with a bowl of steaming broth.


“Here, this should do the trick,” he said, seating himself near the half-dragon. He filled a spoon and started lifting it to Almonihah's mouth.


“Can do that,” he muttered.


“No, you can't,” Brynmor replied, “And I rather not have you spill any of this broth trying.”


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No, Almonihah's not the type to convalesce quietly. But I think I'll spare you most of his orneriness and skip to some more interesting things next post.

Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Chapter 17-1

Chapter 17: Refuge


Almonihah returned from consciousness only slowly. The first thing he became aware of was the smell of the room around him. At least, he was pretty sure it was a room—the odors around him seemed like cut wood and earth, like the cabins of Ranger Headquarters would smell. The smells seemed... much more intense, somehow, or perhaps he was simply much more aware of them. Certainly there seemed to be a number of them he didn't recognize.


Next he became aware of the sounds in the room. Someone was breathing near him... probably sitting, given that it sounded close to his level and he was laying down on his side, on what felt like some furs. The person was holding mostly still, just moving occasionally.


Almonihah frowned a bit as these thoughts sunk in. It was... odd for him to figure this out. Normally he didn't get this much information out of smell and hearing, despite the emphasis Zrathanzon had put on paying attention to all his senses. He wondered if it was just because he had his eyes closed, so he was paying attention to his ears and nose more.


So, he opened his eyes. He was, as he had thought, in a cabin. He was pretty sure it was at Ranger Headquarters, given that Commander Imlloen was sitting on a chair next to him. The elf noticed Almonihah open his eyes.


“Are you actually with us this time, Almonihah?”


Almonihah winced. His voice seemed loud after he'd been listening so intently to the near-silence in the room. He tried to respond, but his voice came out as a raspy mumble.


“Here.” Imlloen held a waterskin out to the half-dragon.


Almonihah tried to sit up, and almost fell back down. Instead, he eased himself back down and slowly grabbed the waterskin with one hand. After a couple of swallows, he felt like he might be able to speak again.


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Short post. I got kind of distracted over the weekend. But yes, Almonihah's not dead.

Saturday, January 7, 2012

Chapter 16-3

Almonihah had thought he had been traveling as fast as possible before. Now, as he went back north, he knew he'd only been traveling as fast as was safe. But safety now lay in getting out of the Madlands as fast as possible, for if he ran out of supplies before getting out...


It seemed the Madlands themselves recognized his peril, and fought to keep him trapped within them. Everything—land, vegetation, and animal life, conspired to slow his progress, but somehow the Ranger pressed on, driven on by urgency. He rationed his supplies as much as he dared, but he knew that he needed his strength to survive the journey, so he dared not ration too much.


His water was the first thing to run out. He hated to drink straight from the streams in the Madlands, but he had no choice. At least he had gotten far enough that they flowed in from outside the Madlands... or so he hoped. He wasn't eating very much, but he could survive for longer on little food than no water.


The worst part was, he had no idea how far he had to go. The land itself was different from when he'd come this way—the landmarks were different, even the terrain was different. It made it hard to feel like he was making progress. He knew how many days he'd been traveling in each direction, but there were times he almost wondered if the stars themselves were different in this place, and if that was so, how was he sure he was even headed north...?


The worst part, though, is that he knew the Madlands were starting to affect him. He could swear sometimes that he could almost understand voices in the wind, and he was starting to feel like something was always watching him. Sometimes a Javni'Tolkhrah was, of course, but even when there wasn't anything else moving around him, Almonihah could swear something was watching.


His food ran out. He kept going, hoping that he was near the edge of the Madlands, but he could feel himself getting weaker. Eventually, he knew he would have to eat something. He killed an animal that seemed to not be too badly changed by the Madlands, and ate.


That night, as he slept, he dreamed. It was a fitful, uneasy dream at first, but then it resolved into something... more. It was the sound of the wind... except this time he could understand a voice in it.


It was calling his name.


“I will give you what you have always wanted, Almonihah...” The voice chilled him to the bone.


Before he could respond, the half-dragon felt an agonizing pain shoot through him. He cried out, unsure if he was awake or asleep. He wasn't sure how long it lasted, but when at last it subsided, he felt an odd... weight on his back. Stumbling to his feet, sure now he was awake, he looked in a nearby pond... and saw a pair of draconic wings on his back.


“This is just the beginning...” Even awake, he could understand the voice in the wind. And he knew whose it was.


Roaring out his defiance, Almonihah starting running to the north. But that was too slow. He spread his wings and took to the air, flapping furiously to try to get more speed.


“You cannot escape me, Almonihah...”


Almonihah didn't know how long he flew. He only knew that he had to get away, get far, far away from the Voice, to where he couldn't hear it any more. He was conscious of nothing else, not his fading strength, nor how the tops of the trees below were getting closer. Not until he clipped a branch with a wing and went crashing down through the canopy to the ground below did he notice how low he had gotten, and by then, it was too late.


The last thing he could remember before he drifted into unconsciousness was hearing mad laughter on the wind.


******


Whoops, I guess I was wrong. Almonihah does die.


...


Okay, no he didn't. But it's a cliffhanger! Oh, no! What are you going to do if I suddenly get busy and don't write for another month? Ok, I'm not going to do that. But yes, this is why Almonihah has wings later in his life despite not being born with them. It also explains some other things about him and his wings, that you will see shortly.


Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Chapter 16-2

Almonihah traveled for about a week without anything unexpected happening. He fought several more Javni'Tolkhrah, and every time, it seemed the land itself was fighting against him. He quickly learned to not trust tree branches, overhangs, rocky outcroppings... all betrayed him at critical moments. Other things seemed more... wrong about the land as he went further south, as well. Trees bent in unnatural ways, lush jungle areas bordered on dessicated deserts, until it seemed the terrain could do anything but what it was supposed to. The Javni'Tolkhrah he saw were more bizarre, as well, some frighteningly lethal, some clearly dying of their own impossibility.


Another thing he slowly became aware of was the incessant sound of the wind. Except, it wasn't the wind—it didn't move the trees, and breezes would come through that did. Even when the air was completely still, the ceaseless sound still murmured. At times, he almost imagined it sounded like some unintelligible language, like Jivenesh was muttering insanely across the Madlands. Almonihah quickly dismissed that thought. For some reason, it chilled him.


According to Falloen's journal, it took about a week and a half to reach the half-way point through the Madlands, a vast desert he had called the “Desolation of the Dragonfall”. What forgotten lore lent it that name, Almonihah did not know, but he started looking for it, knowing it would mean he was half done with his journey.


More than a week passed, however, and he saw no sign of it. The half-dragon was a bit busy not being eaten or killed by mobile trees or whatever other madness these lands could create. Things kept getting worse as he got farther into the Madlands. There were times he could swear he could watch grass turn to sand and solid land to lake. The wind-like sound grew louder and more persistent, as well. It made sleeping... difficult. Not that he slept much if he could help it—only enough to keep himself alive.


Eventually, Almonihah decided he must have passed the Desolation. He'd been traveling almost twice as long as it had taken Falloen to reach it, and he'd seen no sign of it. Perhaps in the intervening centuries, the Madlands had swallowed even the mighty wastes Falloen had described. Regardless, he was sure he must be more than halfway by now. A good thing, too—he was starting to run low on supplies.


The land had been trending upwards for the last day, and today he was climbing mountainsides. Fortunately, it seemed that few Javni'Tolkhrah haunted the slopes, and the terrain seemed more stable than it had for the past few days. The climb was arduous, but at least he wasn't fighting for his life the whole way.


He reached the top, but his spirits sunk as he did. On the other side of the mountains, he could see for a long distance. A barren, blasted wasteland, vaguely bowl-shaped, though far too large for even his eyes to see to the other side. And in the middle, a dimly-seen dark smudge that even from here looked chaotic. That would be the Maelstrom, and it was at the heart of the Desolation of the Dragonfall.


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Yeah, that might be a small problem. Just a thought. This chapter is not exactly going to be a pleasant experience for Almonihah. I'll give you a hint, though, he doesn't die at the end of it.

Saturday, December 31, 2011

Chapter 16-1

Chapter 16: Madness


Almonihah camped just short of the Line that night, and then crossed it in the morning. It was quiet on the other side of the line, but he could feel the wrongness in the air. Ignoring the feeling, he pressed forward, moving quickly. Falloen's writings had made clear that making the journey quickly was essential, in order to complete it before running out of supplies.


The first two days of travel were uneventful. The half-dragon traveled warily, ate sparingly, and made sure to use water that was flowing in from the other side of the line. This close to the Line, it was still safe to drink water if it was coming from outside the Madlands. Later that wouldn't be the case, so he needed to conserve his supplies as well as he could.


It was partway through the third day when Almonihah finally became aware that something was stalking him. He'd been expecting this, so much so that he was somewhat surprised it had taken this long. Regardless, he had to figure out what he'd do with the thing now.


Almonihah had turned hunter into prey many times before when facing Javni'Tolkhrah, so he easily fell into his usual tactics. Doubling back to get throw off pursuit and try to get a glimpse at the beast, going around a large tree and then climbing the other side of it and keeping watch for a while, and so forth. This Javni'Tolkhrah seemed pretty clever, as it took him a while to finally catch sight of it, but he eventually did.


It was a rather bizarre monstrosity, even for a Javni'Tolkhrah. It had probably been a deer, once—a big buck, though certainly not as big as it was now. It was covered from head to tail in antlers, that stuck out in every direction and seemed tangled with one another. And most disturbingly, sharp teeth jutted out from its oversized jaw. Overall, it looked like the kind of thing Almonihah wouldn't want close to him.


Instead, he looked for a good spot to hide in ambush for it. It didn't take long to find a little rock outcropping that was just high enough that it wouldn't be able to reach him. Quickly, he climbed up, then lay flat to wait for its approach.


It wasn't long before the Javni'Tolkhrah came into view. Carefully, Almonihah rose to a crouch, nocked and drew and arrow, and then loosed. The arrow sizzled through the air, straight to its mark, but when it struck, it somehow became tangled in the antlers around the beast's body, though it did shear bits of them off.


The half-dragon grunted as he drew another arrow, but just then the ground underneath him gave way. Quickly, he rolled with it and jumped off, landing on his feet, but now in a vulnerable position. Sensing this, the Javni'Tolkhrah charged at him, making some strange, gargling noise as it did. Almonihah recognized an opportunity and fired at its open mouth, but the monster swerved aside. The arrow did manage to penetrate its tangle of antlers to graze its flank, but the beast just seemed to be angered by the injury.


Drawing another arrow, the Ranger waited for his quarry. At the last possible moment, he dove aside, then rose and fired another arrow. This one found its mark, driving into the Javni'Tolkhrah's rear thigh. It screamed in pain, stumbled a bit, but then turned to renew its attack. The stumble had given Almonihah time to draw another arrow, and this time the monster didn't turn aside as the arrow plunged into the roof of its mouth.


Still it refused to fall, but rather stood there and shook its head, foul smoke trickling from its mouth as the magic on the arrow burned its flesh. Calmly, Almonihah drew and fired again. This time, it dropped, an arrow in its eye. Almonihah considered his kill for a moment, but decided to just travel on. If it got to its feet and chased after him again, he'd just kill it more thoroughly next time, and if it went the other way, well, the Ranger on the Line would kill it more thoroughly. And if it really was dead, he was saving himself some time by not making more certain it wasn't going to get back up.


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So, I realized I mislabeled the last post. I've now fixed it. THIS is the start of chapter 16. So I've now gone back and fixed that.

In other news, I'm hoping to get back to the Saturday update schedule. Hopefully I'll keep up with it this time.

Saturday, December 24, 2011

Chapter 15-7


Almonihah had a vague idea of what he wanted to do, but he needed to do some research first. He started by asking around the fire at night for more stories about Falloen Surebow. As the half-dragon had expected, he didn't get a whole lot of information he could trust, but it did further awaken his curiosity.


What he really wanted was something that Falloen had written. He asked Imlloen about it, and was rather surprised to find that he'd actually written a journal which was still in existence. He was a bit less surprised when he learned that some magic had been involved in its preservation. Imlloen seemed a bit reluctant when Almonihah asked to look at it, but he allowed the half-dragon to read it after some strong warnings about what not to do with it.


Almonihah spent as much time over the next week with the journal as he could. He had to get some paper and writing materials for himself for taking notes. If the other Rangers guessed what he was up to, they said nothing, though they did give some odd looks at times.


It was only when he started trying to requisition supplies that Imlloen called him in.


“Almonihah,” Imlloen said when the half-dragon entered his office, “Just what do you think you're doing?”


“Planning t' cross th' Madlands,” Almonihah responded, meeting the Commander's stern gaze unflinchingly.


The elf sighed. “You know I can't support that, and that means the Rangers won't supply you.”


Almonihah just shrugged.


Imlloen stood up explosively and spat out an Elvish oath. “Almonihah, I lose enough Rangers just holding the Line. I can't afford to lose another one to crossing it.” He wasn't quite shouting, but his sudden anger was startling.


“'m done with the Line for a while, 'nd I'm not going t' get myself killed,” Almonihah growled back.


Imlloen slammed his palm on his desk. “That's right, you're not, because you're not going to cross the Madlands. You're not even going to cross the Line! If you're so tired of the Line, you can go north, but I am not going to let a Ranger go kill himself just because he thinks he's Falloen.”


Almonihah's response was as much a growl as speech. “'m not Falloen. I know what t' watch for, thanks t' him, so I'll have a better chance at 't.”


“Do you have any idea how long it's been since Falloen crossed the Madlands? Centuries! Thinking that Falloen's journal gives you some kind of edge is exactly the sort of thing that will get you killed!”


“'nd that's another reason I need t' go. We don't have a clue what's going on. 'nd something is.”


“And you're the one to do the job, huh?”


Almonihah shrugged. “Got any other volunteers?”


The office was silent for a long moment. Finally, the elf slid back into his chair with a sigh.


“I'll have to think about it, Almonihah,” he said. “I still think you've got a good chance of getting yourself killed, but from what I've seen of you, you'd go off and do this without Ranger support. And Naishia knows, we need to know what's going on in the Madlands that's making so many Madness-Touched come across the Line.” Imlloen sighed, then waved a hand dismissively. “I'll give you a decision next morning. Just... let me think about this.”



Imlloen called Almonihah in again the next morning. The Ranger Commander looked like he'd hardly slept.


“Your first priority will be coming back alive,” he said without preamble as the half-dragon walked in.


Almonihah snorted in amused agreement.


“Your other priority will be seeing what's changed since Falloen's time, especially anything that might hint at why the Madness-Touched are coming across the Line in such numbers.” Imlloen paused for Almonihah to nod in acknowledgement, then continued, “But I don't care what you think, if you get the slightest hint that you won't be able to complete the crossing, you come back here as fast as you can. You do this, and you can have whatever supplies you need.”


Almonihah nodded again. Imlloen looked the half-dragon in the eye and said, “Do I have your word?”


“You have my word,” Almonihah responded, evenly.


The elf held his gaze for a long moment, then sighed and said, “I still have deep reservations about this, but... you're right about one thing. We've gotten too complacent about just holding the Line. We need to know more about what we're up against, see if there isn't something more we can do. I still feel like you're going to get yourself killed, but someone needs to take a look on the other side of the line, and you've got about as good a chance as coming back as anyone else I can think of.” He was silent for another moment, then said, “Go talk the the quartermaster and get what you need. See me again before you leave, though.”


The half-dragon nodded one last time, then turned and walked out the door. Just before he closed the door behind him, Imlloen said, “Just... come back alive, Almonihah.”



It took Almonihah the rest of the day to prepare. He would need a lot of food and water—Falloen's writings suggested that even the water in the Madlands was tainted, and was to be drunk only when heavily diluted, and even then only at the edges of the Madlands. Eating anything from the Madlands was out of the question.


The next day dawned bright and clear, a beautiful spring morning. By now, the everyone at the Headquarters knew exactly what he was doing, and while some of them still tried to dissuade him, most responded to his farewells with their own well-wishes. Imlloen settled for a few last admonitions, and he even walked outside to watch the half-dragon walk from camp.


Almonihah glanced back, a bit surprised at the response to his departure, then focused his gaze on the south. A good day's travel would put him at the Line, and after that... the Madlands.


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Christmas Eve post! Though... it's not a particularly Christmas-y post. Oh, well.


So who thinks what Almonihah is doing is a good idea?

Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Chapter 15-6

Almonihah wasn’t sure how many days it was before the first Ranger courier came by. It must have been weeks, though. He’d fallen so quickly into a routine that he’d lost track of time. You wouldn’t think that living in constant fear for your life, waking and sleeping, could become routine, but it had. It was still simultaneously terrifying and exciting at times, but somehow that was part of the routine, too.

Almonihah reported Lonan’s death, as well as the number of Javni’Tolkhrah he’d killed, to the courier. He said no when the courier asked if he needed a relief, and his only request when the courier asked what supplies he needed was for more arrows. The Ranger courier pulled a bundle of arrows out of his pack and handed them to Almonihah, and then was on his way.

The time passed swiftly. Seasons came and went, but they seemed not to matter so much this far south. Sometimes snow would be further down the mountainsides, and sometimes it was further up or just gone, but Almonihah paid it little mind. Hunting the Javni’Tolkhrah took almost all his concentration.

One thing the half-dragon found interesting was just how literal the Line was. He could tell the instant he stepped into the Madlands—there was a palpable difference in the air, in the light, in… everything. It was hard to put a claw on exactly what was so different, but it was a difference that he couldn’t miss.

At first, he stayed well away from the Madlands, even letting Javni’Tolkhrah who he’d been pursuing go if they crossed the Line. Then there was one who’d injured him that he just couldn’t let go. Once he brought it down, he realized he’d been in the Madlands for several minutes. Almonihah quickly returned to the other side of the Line, but not before he started thinking.

The Rangers had few tales of what went on in the Madlands—just what Falloen Surebow had learned in his time crossing them so many years ago, combined with a few observations from Rangers on the edges. They knew that normal animals that wandered south eventually came back north as twisted monstrosities. They knew that there was something… wrong about the very air and ground in the Madlands. Beyond that, there were just the stories from Falloen, about how, deep in the Madlands, even the land under your feet changed from stone to dirt to water.

So Almonihah started straying over the line sometimes. He never went far, and certainly never ate or slept on the other side of the Line, but he explored around a little. He still couldn’t figure out just what was different in the Madlands, just that something was subtly… wrong.

It had been winter once when Almonihah started to feel the fatigue setting in. Being constantly on edge like this took its toll, even for someone used to being watchful. The next time the courier came by, Almonihah asked for a relief. This was exactly why there were always a few Rangers around the Headquarters—no one could stay on the Line forever. It just wore you down.

It was about a month before another Ranger came to relieve Almonihah. The half-dragon was glad enough for the break by then. He’d had a couple of close calls that shouldn’t have been as close as they had been.

Traveling back to the Headquarters was uneventful. He reported to Imlloen when he got back. After the report, Imlloen asked him what he planned to do now.

“Not sure,” the half-dragon replied. “Guess I’ll stay here for a while ‘nd figure out.”

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Gasp! Another post! Amazing, isn’t it?

Anyway, this is a bit shorter of a post, but it sets things up for the next chapter, which is an important one. And then the chapter after that, Almonihah finally meets Zakhin’Dakh, and that will be a lot of fun.