Monday, July 23, 2012
No update today. Sorry!
No update today. Moving... kind of took precedence. However, here's a bit of info on Draezolnian bronze dragons, just so you have a little something to read. :D
Bronze dragons are among the smallest of the metallic dragons, larger only (for their age) than the coppers. Culturally, they are known for being honorable, but unforgiving. One who receives a bronze dragon's trust should count himself fortunate... but one who betrays that trust can never rest in safety.
As lightning-breathers, they often enjoy flying in storms, and are surprisingly capable of doing so, despite the adverse conditions. They often hunt during thunderstorms, the thunder and wind covering their approach. Their body temperatures run somewhat above that of a human, though not so much as a fire-breathing dragon's does. Of all dragons, they often keep the smallest hoards, and move about most often. They also are among the most frequent of dragons to take human form.
Monday, July 16, 2012
Chapter 19-4
It was Zakhin'Dakh, however, that spotted the dragon first. His soft screech brought Almonihah's attention to it.
If Almonihah had been thinking clearly, he would have talked with his
friend about the best tactics to use, about how to not get hit by the
green dragon's acidic breath, how he needed to aim for the weakest,
smallest scales, all of the things Zrathanzon had taught him about
fighting dragons. Of course, if he'd been thinking clearly, he probably
wouldn't have been here at all.
Instead, his thinking was so... wrong
that he couldn't even recognize the wrongness of it. He had come here,
driven by some pressure he could not explain, and now that he caught
sight of the scaled head thrusting itself out of an opening in the side
of a hill, the pressure exploded into rage.
Go! he growled to Zakhin'Dakh, and the big griffon, trusting his friend even though something felt wrong, leaped into the air.
The dragon couldn't help but see a griffon almost as big as it was take
to the air so close to its lair. “Who trespasses here?” it roared at
them.
Almonihah responded with a roar of his own. He had his bow out, but was
discovering just how difficult it was to fire from griffonback. Not
only was it incredibly difficult to get the bow into firing position
without hitting Zakhin'Dakh's head or wing or his own boot, the constant
up and down from his wingbeats made it almost impossible to aim. Then
he noticed the dragon taking a deep breath.
He nudged Zakhin'Dakh hard with one knee. The griffon got the idea and
veered to one side just in time to avoid a torrent of acid, though he
shrieked in pain as part of one back foot caught the edge of it.
Almonihah jumped free as his friend started to right himself, landing on
the ground and bringing his bow up. The dragon was watching
Zakhin'Dakh, readying itself to jump. Quickly Almonihah nocked an arrow,
drew, aimed...
The shaft buried itself in the dragon's eye just as it leaped at the
griffon. It roared in pain, shaking its head and ruining its jump, just
as Zakhin'Dakh rose up above it with a couple powerful flaps of his
wings, then dove on the creature below him. There was a loud CRACK as he
impacted the dragon's shoulder, just where its wing met its back.
It roared again, and lashed out at the griffon on its back with its
fangs. It tore a bite out of Zakhin'Dakh's thigh, bringing another
shriek from him as he twisted around to slash at the head with his
talons. Almonihah's next arrow ricocheted off scales as the two massive
beasts slashed at each other, and the half-dragon cursed as he watched.
His friend, lacking the protection of draconic scales, was losing the
fight, bleeding profusely from several long slashes in his chest and
sides, while Zakhin'Dakh had only been able to make a few superficial
scratches on the dragon's face.
Despite the boiling anger and the fog over his thoughts, Almonihah
retained a certain basic cunning. He circled to the dragon's blinded
side, and then ran towards it, Zithrandrak drawn. Zakhin'Dakh saw him
coming, and redoubled his efforts to injure his foe. He managed to bite
the dragon's clawed foot as it slashed at him, his beak shearing off one
of the dragon's toes with a sickening crunch. The dragon roared again,
pulling its injured foot back and snapping at the griffon, but still not
noticing the half-dragon leaping at its blind eye, silver blade
outstretched.
Almonihah, wings outstretched as he soared toward the dragon, could see
where he was aiming for. Just to the side of where the arrow had gone
in. The shaft hadn't gone deep enough to do more than blind the beast,
but a thin blade sunk deep enough just a little off to the side of the
arrowhead...
The dragon turned its head slightly. Almonihah spread his wings and
flapped once, modifying his trajectory just enough. Zithrandrak shot
forward, the half-dragon's full weight and momentum behind it.
Just as the dragon was inhaling again, the sword sunk in, piercing the
remains of its ruined eye and going deep into its head. Almonihah
grunted as the hilt was torn from his grasp, feeling his hand and arm
shriek briefly in pain as the opposing forces of holding onto
Zithrandrak and flying forward tried to tear them off, then had to grit
his teeth against the pain as his now erratic flight brought his right
wing into contact with a nearby tree. He felt something in his wing
break, and then his other wing struck some low branches as he tumbled
through the air. They pierced the fragile membranes and got tangled with
the bones of his wing, tearing great rents in it as he struck the tree
itself with his body then fell to the ground.
Almonihah groaned as the fog seemed to clear from his mind. He had no
idea why he'd been so stupid as to do this. He was lucky that the dragon
had concentrated more on Zakhin'Dakh than on him...
Zakhin'Dakh.
The half-dragon stumbled to his feet and made his way back to where they had fought. Zakhin'Dakh... wasn't moving.
******
Monday, July 9, 2012
Chapter 19-3
Zakhin'Dakh
screeched an acknowledgement, walked forward, and after a few fumbles,
picked up the barrel and took off. As they flew over the town Almonihah
could hear exclamations of fear below them, but ignored them. They would
see soon enough what they were doing, and if they still wanted to fear
them after that, well, that was their choice.
It
didn't take long for them to fly to the river with the barrel. Filling
it on the wing was a bit trickier: Zakhin'Dakh trailed one of his wings
in the water and almost fell out of the air, but managed to recover. He
had to beat his wings hard to gain altitude again, with both Almonihah
and the full water barrel, but managed to get back high enough to fly
back toward the town.
Half of the water in the barrel had sloshed out of the barrel on the
way back to the fire—bringing a couple more exclamations from below when
some spilled out while they flew over the town. Zakhin'Dakh's aim
wasn't very good on dumping the remaining water, so only a little of it
hissed on the flames Almonihah had pointed out. It looked like the
building had once held a forge, which was probably where the fire had
started from.
“Guess we need more,” he said, looking down at Zakhin'Dakh's head in front of him.
Zakhin'Dakh didn't know how many more times they took the water back
and forth. After a couple times he got really good at not messing up
getting the water and not spilling it, and he was more careful about
dropping it exactly where Almonihah wanted. The fire started to be
smaller each time they came back, and Almonihah sounded happy, so
Zakhin'Dakh was happy even though he was getting really tired.
Almonihah could tell that the big griffon was tiring, so when it seemed
like the fire was under control, he guided him into land by hole in the
stockade. Zakhin'Dakh landed heavily, panting, and Almonihah jumped off
to land next to him.
How do you feel, my friend? he murmured in Great Eagle.
Tired. Happy, replied the griffon.
Rest up, and I'll talk, Almonihah said, patting Zakhin'Dakh's leg before walking over to the nervous guards standing and watching the pair.
As he approached, he took a closer look at the damage to the palisade.
It was... odd. A rough semicircle taken out of the tops of the posts
making up the wall, not quite to the ground at its lowest point. Looking
closer, he could see that the edge of it didn't look like it had been
bitten or burned or clawed, but rather... melted. A quick glance at the
ground didn't show any sign of something other than humans walking,
though the many boot-prints might have obliterated any traces of
something else.
“So what happened?” Almonihah asked once he was near the guards.
For a nervous moment none of them answered. Finally one spoke. “A dragon.”
Several things clicked together in the half-dragon's mind. “Green scales?”
They nodded.
“What size?”
After a moment, they all answered at once, with contradictory
responses. After a moment, Almonihah pointed at Zakhin'Dakh. “Big as
him?”
A moment of conference, then one answered, “Close enough.”
So, a green dragon. An adult, but not a particularly old one. “'nd which way did it leave?”
“You're not going after it?” one of the guards blurted out, incredulous.
Almonihah smiled, showing his rather draconic set of teeth. “I don't
particularly like a lot of my father's kind,” he growled as he stopped
smiling.
The guards looked at him, over at Zakhin'Dakh, and then back at
Almonihah. Finally, one pointed to the southwest. “That way, back into
the hills.”
“Then that's where 'll start looking.” Almonihah turned and walked back to Zakhin'Dakh.
Ready to hunt a dragon? Almonihah asked the big griffon.
Dragon? Zakhin'Dakh repeated, not recognizing the word.
You'll see. This one's supposed to be about as big as you.
Zakhin'Dakh screeched in surprise. As big?
Almonihah nodded. That's what they say. Let's go see if they're right.
Almonihah set a fast pace as the traveled, but didn't let Zakhin'Dakh
fly. When he complained about it, Almonihah explained that he didn't
want the dragon seeing them any sooner than he could help it. Privately,
he thought the giant griffon would be pretty easy to see on the ground,
too, but it gave them a better chance.
Why? Hunt? Zakhin'Dakh suddenly asked as they walked.
“Why are we hunting the dragon?” Almonihah asked, surprised by the question.
Zakhin'Dakh nodded and screeched an affirmative.
“It attacked those people. It's dangerous, and you can't just talk with
dragons.” Something didn't sound... quite right about his explanation
to him.
Zakhin'Dakh's screech sounded doubtful, as well, but he didn't ask anything more.
Soon, Almonihah's trained eye could detect signs of a dragon. Bark that
had been scraped off a tree when something large and scaly brushed it
too hard... hints of impact points where a large creature had slammed
into its prey from the air... they weren't frequent, but they were
there.
It was Zakhin'Dakh, however, that spotted the dragon first.
********
Yeah, Almonihah doesn't particularly like dragons that kill people, for some reason.
Monday, July 2, 2012
Chapter 19-2
Zakhin'Dakh
looked at what Almonihah was looking at. It looked like a funny little
cloud. Something about it made him a bit uneasy.
“Come on,” Almonihah murmured, urgently, breaking out into a ground-eating trot.
The big griffon screeched in response and followed.
They covered ground quickly, and soon both could see the source of the
smoke, one with draconic eyes, the other with aquiline. There was a
fair-sized stockaded town downslope from them. Even their sight could
make out little detail from this distance, but it seemed that part of
the stockade had been knocked down, and something within the town was
blazing.
Almonihah took this in quickly. “Stay here,” he said to Zakhin'Dakh. “I'll call when it's time for you to come.”
Zakhin'Dakh screeched disappointedly, but settled down to wait as the
Ranger sprinted toward the town.
Almonihah ran his hardest, wings
clamped to his back so they wouldn't drag him back. Soon he could make
out some people working to put out the fire, as well as several armed
guards standing near the breach in the wall, watching the ground and
skies nervously. One of them spotted him, and soon four were marching
out to meet him.
“Who goes there?” One yelled as soon as they were close enough to be heard.
“Almonihah. A Ranger,” Almonihah yelled back.
The guards halted and conferred for a moment. Almonihah walked a bit
closer and then stopped, too. Now wasn't the time to crowd them.
After a few seconds, one yelled again. “What do you want here?”
“It looked like you had a problem. Thought I could help.”
Even from here the half-dragon could see the doubt on their faces at
that response. Then one of them suddenly looked thoughtful and took a
couple steps toward him.
“I think I've heard of someone like you...” He wasn't quite yelling, but Almonihah could still here him easily.
“Gold scales? About my height?” The guard nodded hesitantly. “He trained me.”
The guard that had come forward turned back to his fellows. They talked
for a little while again, then he turned back to Almonihah.
“How can you help?”
“Since 't doesn't look like you're fighting now...” he thought a
moment. “Can help with the fire. Get your biggest barrel out and we'll
dump water on it.”
The guard looked a bit confused. “We?”
Almonihah turned and shouted as loud as he could. “Zakhin'Dakh!”
The griffon, which probably looked like little more than a shape on the
horizon to the humans behind Almonihah, perked up at the call, and flew
over to see what his friend was calling him for.
The guards shouted and formed a line with their spears pointing outwards as Zakhin'Dakh flew closer.
Almonihah turned back.
“Don't worry,” he yelled. “He won't hurt you.”
They didn't seem reassured, especially not when the big griffon landed
next to Almonihah and his true size was apparent. Zakhin'Dakh looked
curiously at the guards.
People? He asked.
Almonihah grinned a bit. Yes, and they're a bit scared of you.
Zakhin'Dakh puffed his chest out. Because big! he screeched happily.
The half-dragon's smile widened. Yes, but we don't want them to be frightened. Try not to look so big and scary.
Zakhin'Dakh screeched unhappily at this. Glancing back at the guards,
Almonihah saw that they had relaxed a little bit when no attack came,
but they were definitely not at ease.
“'f you don't want us in town, just bring th' barrel out here and point us t' th' nearest water,” he yelled to them.
After another moment of discussion, one of the guards yelled back,
“Wait here!” and then the whole group marched back to the town.
Zakhin'Dakh screeched inquisitively. Almonihah looked back over to him, a bit of a grin playing around his lips again.
People tend to be nervous about big creatures like you around their towns. Things like that, he jerked his head at the damaged stockade, tend to happen when something your size visits.
Oh.
While Zakhin'Dakh's screech wasn't actual Great Eagle, its meaning was
clear to Almonihah. His next sound, however, was his favorite Great
Eagle word... after big, of course.
Why?
This took Almonihah a little while to answer, and he responded in
Common since he wasn't quite sure his friend's Great Eagle was good
enough to understand the explanation. “Depends. Some 're just hungry 'nd
too stupid t' realize th' danger. Some just like killing things...
they're just evil. Others...” he shrugged. “Don't know.”
Oh.
The big griffon responded again, and was actually quiet for a bit as he
thought. Almonihah could make out the guards talking with others at the
(undamaged) gate to the town, and after a little while, a man came out
rolling a barrel.
I'll need to ride you for a bit, I think, Almonihah said. When Zakhin'Dakh looked over at him, beak open to speak, he added, It won't be for long enough for the problems to matter.
Okay! Zakhin'Dakh screeched happily, kneeling down a bit to make it easier for Almonihah to mount.
He was sitting at the base of the griffon's neck by the time the man,
obviously nervous at the sight of Zakhin'Dakh, stopped rolling the
barrel.
“River's just on the other side of the town,” he yelled, not quite close enough to speak normally and be heard.
Almonihah nodded at him, and after a moment, he took the hint and
started jogging back to the town. Once there was a bit of distance
between him and the barrel, Almonihah murmured to Zakhin'Dakh, Think we can take that barrel and find that river?
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I
really need to find more words for bird sounds. I overuse screech,
shriek I reserve for when he's really loud, chirp is too... small for
him...
Anyway, this is leading somewhere... any guesses as to what?
Wednesday, June 27, 2012
Chapter 19-1
Chapter 19: Two
They headed roughly east-northeast. Almonihah had some vague idea that
they should go to the coast, though no specific idea of where. He didn't
really think about why, it just... seemed right. Certainly Zakhin'Dakh
seemed happy enough to head that way. He wanted to see these strange
people things Almonihah talked about, and their funny city-things.
Almonihah continued teaching Zakhin'Dakh along the way. More Great
Eagle was the most important lesson, of course, but the griffon could
only take so much of that, so Almonihah often talked of other things.
Places they might go, or different ways of hunting and tracking, or the
animals and plants he had seen in his journeys... Zakhin'Dakh listened
rapturously. The one thing that still bothered him was that Almonihah
insisted on walking around, when it was so much slower than flying. He
kept asking his little friend why he didn't use his wings, but the
half-dragon steadfastly refused to answer.
One day, Zakhin'Dakh simply stopped and screeched, On!
Almonihah looked at him blankly and grunted.
You, he pointed a talon at the half-dragon. On.
Suddenly Almonihah laughed. It's not that easy, Zakhin'Dakh, he replied.
Why?
Almonihah switched back to the Common Tongue. “Can't just hop on your
back and ride. I wouldn't have anything t' hold onto, and my scales'd
rub your neck raw.”
The big griffon screeched disappointedly and started dejectedly walking along. Shaking his head, Almonihah followed.
“Just need t' get a saddle,” he called after Zakhin'Dakh. “When we get t' a city.”
Zakhin'Dakh perked up. City! he screeched.
By the time they reached the Orc Hills, Zakhin'Dakh could sometimes
string together a complete sentence, though the words often weren't in
the correct order. Almonihah started to ask him the occasional question,
trying to get an idea of what his view on the world was. He quickly
gathered that it was rather simplistic, but more complex than an
animal's. He wasn't quite sure if this was normal for a griffon or if it
was related to whatever it was about that valley that had made him so
large. Almonihah's suspicion was that it was a little of both, combined
with a bit of Zakhin'Dakh just being an unusual griffon.
One conversation surprised him, however. He asked one day what Zakhin'Dakh most wanted.
More big! was the griffon's enthusiastic reply.
It took Almonihah only a moment to interpret the reply. It brought
another laugh. Oh, but it felt good to laugh. He didn't remember when
the last time he'd laughed before meeting Zakhin'Dakh was. The thought
brought a bit of an odd twist to his smile, though it cleared a bit as
he thought of who might have been behind his meeting the griffon.
“Why would you want to be bigger, Zakhin'Dakh?” Almonihah asked, still
smiling. “Don't think there's a griffon around who's bigger than you.”
It took Zakhin'Dakh a while to think of how to answer the question. He hadn't really ever thought about why he wanted things, just that he wanted them.
Big better! Big happy! Big not run away small thing.
Almonihah's grin grew broader. “Don't think there's much that won't be afraid of you, Zakhin'Dakh. Except dragons.”
The griffon raised his head and puffed out his chest. Dragons scared too more big!
The only response this brought was another laugh.
Nothing bothered them when they crossed the Orc Hills. Almonihah wanted
to think it was because he'd been careful not to attract attention, but
he was pretty sure it had as much to do with nothing wanting to attract
Zakhin'Dakh's attention. Despite their reputation among most of their
neighbors, orcs generally weren't any more stupid than the average
human, and it would've taken a lot of orcs to kill the both of them.
More than generally wandered the areas they traveled through.
They reached the other side of the Hills in the late evening. There was
a fair-sized town not far from here, if Almonihah recalled correctly
from when he and Zrathanzon had gone through this area. It wasn't long
before he could see the smoke from their fires in the distance.
As they neared, he frowned. That was... too much smoke.
******
Zakhin'Dakh is one of the few things on all of Draezoln that can get Almonihah to smile and laugh.
Friday, June 8, 2012
Chapter 18-4
Hours
later, the half-dragon—he'd said to call him “Almonihah”, though
Zakhin'Dakh didn't really understand how that mattered when he couldn't
say anything—said he had to leave. Suddenly the griffon realized he
didn't want his new friend to go, and so he decided to keep him from
going. He made a funny noise when Zakhin'Dakh trapped him under one of
his taloned feet.
He tried to talk, and after a bit Zakhin'Dakh got the impression he
couldn't say anything when he was leaning on him. Zakhin'Dakh eased up a
bit.
“I'll come back tomorrow,” Almonihah gasped.
With a disappointed screech, Zakhin'Dakh let him all the way up, then
watched as he started climbing back down. It seemed silly that he didn't
use his wings when it would be so much faster. Then he realized he was
rather hungry, and forgot about watching the half-dragon in his haste to
do something about that.
The next day was a good day for flying, but somehow Zakhin'Dakh didn't
feel quite as happy as he normally did. He did have a lot to think
about, though, like wondering where Almonihah had come from and what
else he might be able to talk about. Just talking with the half-dragon
had given Zakhin'Dakh the impression that there was a whole lot he
didn't know that he'd never imagined there even was to know. It didn't
occur to him that a thought like that was unusual for a griffon.
He really hoped Almonihah would come back soon.
He had just taken to the air again after eating in the morning when he
saw the half-dragon. With a joyful shriek, he dived down and landed in
front of Almonihah.
Almonihah did something with his face again. “Glad t' see me?”
Zakhin'Dakh nodded and screeched enthusiastically.
“Well, where were we...”
It soon seemed to the big griffon like he'd been looking forward to
Almonihah's daily visits his entire life. The Ranger taught him all
kinds of new things, like how to look at the ground and tell what had
walked there recently, or how to guess what the weather was going to be
like. He also talked about a lot of things Zakhin'Dakh had never seen,
like people and cities. Zakhin'Dakh wanted to see them, too.
The most frustrating thing, though, was not being able to tell
Almonihah what he wanted and what he was thinking. The half-dragon
seemed to know that, too.
“There's got t' be some way for you t' talk... 'r at least
communicate...” he said one day, looking out at something Zakhin'Dakh
couldn't see.
The griffon screeched and nodded in agreement.
“Hmmmm...” Almonihah was quiet for a bit. “I suppose you could scratch some writing with a talon...”
So he started trying to teach Zakhin'Dakh to read and write. It was
hard. Zakhin'Dakh didn't really understand how he knew what words meant,
much less how to look at something and figure out what word it was
supposed to be. But he really wanted to talk, so he tried really hard.
After a while he could sometimes scratch out something understandable in
the dirt.
It was about then that Almonihah realized something. “You've got an
eagle's beak,” he said one day, like it was an amazing thing.
Zakhin'Dakh was a bit confused, and his soft screech echoed that confusion.
Almonihah looked up at the griffon. “'t means I can teach you Great Eagle.”
The griffon screeched happily, even though he didn't really know what that meant.
It turned out it meant a lot more hard work. Zakhin'Dakh had no real
concept of language, despite being able to understand the sounds
Almonihah made, so learning to speak was slow going. Only his intense
desire to communicate kept him going, though he could only do so much
each day. When he got tired of trying to talk, he would make his
frustration known and he and Almonihah would do something else for the
rest of the day.
Eventually, he managed to get down the concept of words, and started
screeching them out to try to get across what he wanted or what he was
thinking about. His favorite was “Big!” which he liked to exclaim
whenever he took advantage of his great size. He still got frustrated
when he didn't know the word for something, though he found that he
could sometimes use other words in his slowly expanding vocabulary to
get across what he wanted a word for. It helped that Almonihah was so
smart. Zakhin'Dakh admired that a lot in his friend.
One day, though, Zakhin'Dakh noticed that Almonihah's face looked
different. He'd finally figured out that the half-dragon was happy when
his mouth was curved up more, but now he hadn't seen this face very
much. It kind of seemed like the opposite of the happy face, though,
which made the griffon a bit nervous.
I think I have to go now, he said.
Go?
Zakhin'Dakh repeated. He wasn't quite sure he understood what Almonihah
had said, since he'd said it in Great Eagle, and he still had trouble
understanding it sometimes.
Leave. I need to leave. I have... other places I need to be.
It took the big griffon a few moments to think through exactly what that meant. Then, with an angry No! he jumped on the half-dragon.
“Remember,” Almonihah gasped, “Not to crush me.”
With an unhappy screech, Zakhin'Dakh eased up a bit. No go! he screeched at his friend.
Almonihah shook his head a bit—as much as he could while pinned on the ground. I can't stay here forever, he said, switching back to Great Eagle, And now's the time I need to go.
Why? That was one of Zakhin'Dakh's favorite words, after “big”.
Almonihah was quiet for a moment. Somewhere out there, there's something I need to be doing.
It didn't occur to Zakhin'Dakh to question that answer. With a long,
sad screech, he slowly let Almonihah up, then settled down miserably on
the ground to watch his friend leave.
“Sorry,” Almonihah said softly as he turned and left. Zakhin'Dakh
watched him go with despair, not knowing what he could possibly do with
his life now that he knew there was so much interesting stuff to learn
and do.
Then he had an idea.
He stood up and took a step toward the Ranger's back. With! Come! he screeched as he started running toward his friend.
Almonihah turned around. You want to come with me? he asked.
Yes! Zakhin'Dakh screeched happily as he stood in front of the half-dragon.
Almonihah smiled. After a moment, he said, “Well, if you're going to come with me, I think you need a name. How about...”
Zakhin'Dakh turned his head, looking at Almonihah. He didn't really
understand the whole 'name' thing very well yet, but he understood it
was important somehow to Almonihah.
“Zakhin'Dakh.”
Zakhin'Dakh sat for a moment, then screeched, Why?
Almonihah laughed. “It means 'Swift Wing' in Draconic. I thought it suited you.”
The big griffon nodded and screeched in agreement. Then it occurred to him that this meant Almonihah had agreed with his idea.
With come! He shrieked happily, rearing up on his hind legs and spreading his wings in excitement.
The half-dragon smiled wider, though he stepped back a bit to make sure
Zakhin'Dakh didn't land on him. “Yes, you're coming with me. Now let's
go,” he said, then turned and started walking.
Zakhin'Dakh followed, ecstatically happy at the thought of not only
staying with his friend but also maybe seeing some of the new places
Almonihah had told him about.
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This
has by far been the most fun part of the chapter to write. It was a lot
of fun seeing Zakhin'Dakh's viewpoint on this part of his and
Almonihah's shared history, and, well, he's just a fun character to get
into.
This is the end of chapter 18, so we'll be
mostly returning to Almonihah's point of view for the rest of book one,
though I'm sure Zakhin'Dakh will let me know what he was thinking about
some of these things. I anticipate it being three or four more chapters
until we get to Garkhen and book 2. Which will be a lot different than
book 1--Garkhen's history is dominated by one event, so most of the book
will revolve around it.
Thursday, May 24, 2012
Chapter 18-3
The creature did something with its face. Zakhin'Dakh looked at it curiously. After a moment, it made some more noises.
“You lived here long?”
Again the griffon understood the meaning of the sounds, but he had no
idea how to respond to the question. So he just looked at the weird
creature, a bit confused.
“Nod your head like this,” the creature moved its head up and down, “To
say yes. And shake your head like this,” it moved its head from side to
side, “To say no.”
It took Zakhin'Dakh a moment to figure out what the thing was saying,
and then a moment more to figure out what it wanted. Then he moved his
head up and down quickly, then realized he wasn't quite sure that was
right, so he stopped and screeched a bit uncertainly at the creature
standing in front of him.
“So yes, you have lived here a while,” it said, again doing something with its face.
Well, it seemed like the moving-head-up-and-down thing was right, so
Zakhin'Dakh did it again with more enthusiasm this time, screeching to
emphasize his increased assurance.
The creature made some noises again. “Well, were you this big when you got here?”
He thought the question over for a bit, then shook his head with a negative screech.
“Hm...”
The creature was quiet for a moment. Zakhin'Dakh looked it over again.
It really was a funny-looking thing. It was scaly like a lizard, but
stood on two feet like those big things he'd seen before. It had wings,
but didn't use them, which seemed weird.
“Wondering what I am?” It asked.
Zakhin'Dakh moved his head up and down—a nod, it had called the motion—and screeched happily that it had asked for him.
“'m a half-dragon. Father was a bronze dragon, mother was a human.”
Zakhin'Dakh screeched
uncertainly, a bit confused. He'd seen a dragon once, he thought, a
long way away. Some big winged thing. A human, though... he oddly had
some image of what a human was, even though he'd never seen one as far
as he knew.
The creature... the half-dragon made a series of noises. Zakhin'Dakh
looked at it, a bit more confused. “t'd take a while t' explain,” it
said.
The
big griffon screeched sadly. That sounded like he wasn't going to
explain. Which was sad, because he wanted to know. Then the half-dragon
spoke again.
“Want t' know what I was doing?”
Brought out of his sadness, Zakhin'Dakh nodded and screeched excitedly, taking a step toward the half-dragon.
“Was just looking at your tracks.”
That
didn't really mean much of anything to him. He had some vague idea from
somewhere—probably wherever he could understand the sounds from—that
tracks had something to do with marking the ground when you walked, but
he still didn't really understand what 'looking at tracks' meant.
The half-dragon spoke again. “This 's going t' take a while...”
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