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Monday, July 26, 2010

Chapter 6-2

The year passed swiftly, much as past years had. Almonihah was pleased to note how much progress he was making in the various skills he was learning, though he could tell from observing Zrathanzon when he took time to practice his own skills instead of teaching his young pupil that he still had a long way to go. Almonihah was particularly pleased when Zrathanzon got a pair of small short swords to for the younger half-dragon to use in place of the daggers he had been using.


The first snow of the year came early, catching them still several days' travel east of Llinos's valley. Zrathanzon seemed a bit worried by this.


“Early winters usually mean trouble,” he explained to Almonihah. “Creatures that can usually get enough food stored up for winter in a normal year sometimes come south to finish getting ready for the snows when winter comes early.”


The next day, as they were traveling, Zrathanzon suddenly stopped. Without turning, he asked the younger half-dragon, “Almonihah, do you notice something odd?”


Almonihah frowned in concentration as he strained his senses for something out of the ordinary. After a few moments, his frown changed from one of focus to one of worry.


“It's too quiet.”


Zrathanzon nodded. “We'd better tread carefully and quietly. No telling what's wrong.”


They traveled in silence for the next few minutes before Zrathanzon stopped again. This time Almonihah didn't need any time to tell what was wrong. There was a narrow swath of large footprints heading south in the shallow snow lingering in the shade of the trees.


Zrathanzon stooped down to examine the footprints, then cursed in Draconic. “Ice trolls,” he spat the words out. “A whole tribe of them. Must have had a tough year up north and decided to come south for easier pickings.”


The Ranger stood up and whistled for Varack'Nara, who was soaring overhead. When he landed, the older half-dragon motioned for Almonihah to get on the griffon. "You'll need him to keep up with me," was his explanation.


Once Almonihah had mounted, Zrathanzon started running in the direction the footprints headed. “There's a village just south of the woods here.”


Almonihah needed no further explanation.



They traveled as quickly as they could, hoping to arrive in time to help. They reached the edge of the forest just in time to see a large group of creatures charging towards the stockade surrounding thing village. The creatures looked vaguely humanoid, though they stooped over and ran with both feet and the knuckles of their hands like some kind of gorilla. Some clutched clubs or spears in their hands as they ran, though how they could hold on to the weapons and still use their knuckles to run was a bit of a mystery to Almonihah. Their hides ranged in shade from a dirty white, like old snow, to a very pale blue.


Zrathanzon broke into a run again as the ice trolls reached bowshot of the stockade. A few arrows flew out to meet them, and while most found their mark, only a couple actually penetrated the thick hides of the trolls, and even those didn't seem to do any true harm. The trolls with spears paused for a moment to throw their spears in reply. As far as Almonihah could tell, they didn't hit any of the men guarding the stockade, but it did make them spend some time ducking and dodging instead of nocking arrows.


“Almonihah, stay back and just shoot arrows,” Zrathanzon commanded as Varack'Nara started to follow after the Ranger . “You and Varack'Nara don't have any business getting close to an ice troll.”


Almonihah didn't need to be told that twice. The first of the ice trolls were getting near the stockade now, and he could tell that, even hunched over, the creatures must be nearly as tall as the wall was. He definitely didn't want to get close to them if he could help it. Varack'Nara didn't seem eager to get close to the creatures, either, and he glided down to a landing well away from them.


When the first trolls reached the walls, they stood up all the way, which brought their clubs and massive fists on level with the top of the wall. One of the defenders managed to put a spear through a troll's eye, and it fell back to the ground with a thud that Almonihah could hear even from where he was. Most of the defenders weren't as lucky, and the trolls' blows sent them flying. Almonihah doubted any of them were alive when they landed.


Then Zrathanzon fired an arrow. As soon as it left his bow, it blazed with a bright white light. It sped through the air much faster than the humans' arrows had, and buried itself deep in the neck of one of the trolls. The beast stumbled, clutching its throat, then toppled to the ground. The other trolls paused to look behind them, searching for this new threat. This gave the human defenders a chance to strike. A fresh barrage of arrows, spears, and other weapons forced those trolls nearest the walls to turn their attention back to the humans. What looked like the largest of the trolls gestured to some of the other trolls, then at Zrathanzon. About half a dozen trolls from the back of the group turned back and started to charge towards the Ranger and his pupil.


Stay here,” the half-gold dragon whispered to the younger half-dragon, then continued running towards the trolls.


Almonihah obediently halted. He watched as his mentor fired two more arrows even while running, each shot felling another troll. Then he was too close to the trolls. He put his bow away and drew his sword, which burst into flames. Almonihah wondered why his mentor hadn't used all of the magical abilities of his weapons when they had been fighting the fell-wolves, but filed away the question as he drew his bowstring to do what he could do to help the older half-dragon.


Zrathanzon nimbly dodged the club that tried to smash him as he reached the four trolls, and neatly hamstrung the troll who was wielding the club. The giant creature cried out in pain as its leg gave out underneath it. The Ranger was already moving on as it fell, slashing the wrist tendons of a fist that tried to smash him, stabbing another troll in the kidney region, then ducking under another club.


Almonihah, who had been looking for an opening, thought he saw one. He fired his little arrow at the eyes of the troll who was clutching his bleeding wrist with his other hand. He watched his arrow as it flew to its target, only to see it skip off the thick hide of the troll's shoulder. Determinedly, he knocked another arrow and took another shot.


While his pupil was doing what he could, Zrathanzon had worked his way back around to the hamstrung troll, which was shakily trying to get back up on its other leg. Zrathanzon darted under it as it rose up on its knuckles and one leg, his sword flashing. The troll collapsed to the ground, its last breaths bubbling through the blood flowing from the gash in its throat.


One of Almonihah's arrows finally penetrated the troll's hide. The creature grunted in surprise, looked up at the young half-dragon, and started charging towards him. Then it toppled face-first into the ground as it too was hamstrung, as Zrathanzon moved to protect his protégé. The Ranger jumped up on its back and stabbed his sword down into its back, piercing its heart. Then he ducked under a club as one of the remaining two trolls swung at him, then jumped off the dead troll just high enough to chop into the attacking troll between its ribs. As it fell, he quickly finished off the last remaining troll.


The battle at the stockade was going badly for the human defenders. Only one more troll had fallen, and there seemed to be only a few warriors still fighting those that remained. Zrathanzon hurried towards the stockade, and then, once he was sure he was close enough to be heard clearly, roared out something in a harsh, guttural language that Almonihah didn't recognize, though he guessed it was probably Trollish.


Whatever the Ranger said, it got the attention of the big troll. He responded in the same guttural language that Zrathanzon had spoken. The half-gold dragon responded, and then the big troll said something to the other trolls. They started to back away from the wall.


Zrathanzon called out to the remaining human defenders. “They've called a truce while I settle this with their chief. If you stop fighting, they'll stop.”


Warily, the humans stopped firing at the trolls. Meanwhile, Zrathanzon and the big troll who must have been the chief the Ranger had referred to approached each other. They spoke some more, the troll chief emphasizing some points by pounding his club on the ground. After some discussion, they both fell into ready stances and started circling each other.


The troll struck first, springing forwards and slamming its club down surprisingly fast for such a large, ungainly-looking creature. Zrathanzon wasn't caught off guard, however. He had already dodged to the side, his flaming sword slashing towards the chief's forearm. Surprisingly, the troll managed to move quickly enough that the sword only singed its hide. A little bit surprised, Zrathanzon leaped back just in time to avoid a counterattack from the troll chief. Clearly this wasn't going to be as easy as the other trolls.


They circled warily for a little while longer. This time Zrathanzon initiated the exchange, dashing forwards to slash at the troll. It swung its club high at his head as he neared, but the Ranger, rather than dodging, dove under it, coming to his feet inside of the troll's reach before it could recover from its swing. He slashed at it, and it could only dodge enough to turn what could have been a very dangerous blow to a painful gash across its belly. It did have a surprise for Zrathanzon, however, as it kicked him hard enough to knock him back beyond the reach of the club.


Despite obviously being caught off guard by the blow, Zrathanzon turned his landing into an acrobatic roll, somehow ending up back on his feet before the troll chief could take advantage of his blow. It swung at him, narrowly missing him. As it recovered from its swing, the half-gold dragon breathed a gout of fire at its face. While it truly didn't do a lot of damage—troll hide is amazingly tough—it did blind the big troll for just long enough for Zrathanzon to get inside its reach again. It managed to get its arm in the way just in time to turn what would have been a stab in the kidneys into a stab in the arm, but from the way the creature grunted, it was obvious that the deep wound had caused it a lot of harm.


Zrathanzon danced back out of the way as it brought its club back around, then again as it whipped the weapon back. Then he darted forwards as it stumbled a bit, its wounds slowing its recovery just slightly. He wasn't quite in time to dodge as it suddenly turned its stumble into a swing. The club only hit him glancingly, but it was enough to knock him over, though again he rolled with the blow right back onto his feet. As the club passed by again, he dodged back, then struck the club two-handed with his sword. It stuck deep in the wood, and was ripped out of his hands as the club passed by. The troll said something that was clearly boastful. Zrathanzon simply warily circled, watching the chief.


The troll idly walked towards Zrathanzon, swinging its club lazily. It clearly no longer regarded the Ranger as a threat. Zrathanzon simply continued to dodge, watching the troll carefully. After a while it got a strange expression on its face, as if suddenly realizing that it had failed to account for something. Then it yelped and threw its now flaming club away from itself. Zrathanzon ran after it, then retrieved his flaming sword from it, its work well-done.


The troll chief watched Zrathanzon approach closely, obviously aware of how the Ranger had just turned the tables. This time, as the half-gold dragon charged, there were only fists to meet him, and while they moved quickly, he was faster. He managed to get around to the side of the beast, and slashed the back of its leg. As it stumbled, he nimbly moved behind it, stabbing deep into its back in a couple of places. It tried to recover, keeping its weight off of its leg, but it was obviously being slowed by its injuries. It just couldn't move fast enough any more to keep the Ranger away from its vitals.


The battle didn't last much longer.


After the troll chief stopped twitching, Zrathanzon stepped up on top of it and turned to the trolls, who were looking at him uncertainly. He called out in their guttural language, pointing to the dead troll, then to himself. Then he took the remaining trolls in a sweeping gesture, still speaking in Trollish, then gestured sharply to the north.


Grudgingly, the trolls started straggling towards the north. Turning his attention briefly to Almonihah, Zrathanzon called out in Draconic, “Make sure to stay out of their way.”


Almonihah didn't need to be told to stay out of the way of the sullen trolls. He and Varack'Nara were far off to the side when they passed, grumbling in their harsh tongue. Obviously, they weren't happy about leaving without the food they must have come for, but just as obviously, they didn't want to mess with the Ranger.


Once the trolls were out of sight, Almonihah and Varack'Nara returned to Zrathanzon's side. Zrathanzon turned to his pupil from watching the edge of the woods.


“Let's see how much of that herb-lore you remember.”


They approached the gates of what remained of the stockade, leaving the griffon outside with orders to stay put . One of the remaining guards hailed them as they neared.


“Ranger! Praise the gods that you showed up here in time!”


“Just wish I'd been earlier,” was the half-gold dragon's reply.


“We're just as glad you showed up when you did,” the warrior said. “You coming in?”


Zrathanzon nodded. “See what we can do for the injured.”


The warrior motioned to someone behind the wall, then turned back to the half-dragons with a sigh. “I'm not sure there's many you can do much for, but we're grateful for anything you can do.”


They entered the village, and it was clear what the guard meant. There were several men sprawled on the ground, and even a couple partway through walls of some of the homes in the village. None of them were moving.


After asking around a bit, they found the place the surviving wounded had been taken. There were only a couple of them, men who had only been struck glancingly by the trolls. A priest was there, caring for them. He looked up as the two half-dragons entered.


“I've done everything I can for them. They should be fine in a few days,” the priest said, stepping aside for the Ranger to inspect his patients.


Zrathanzon shook his head. “I doubt I could do anything more than you have.”


The priest nodded in appreciation, then turned back to his patients.


The Ranger turned to his pupil. “Let's go. There's not anything more we can do here.”


A few villagers thanked the half-dragons as they passed on their way to the gates. Just as they reached the gates, a woman's voice reached them, cursing them. Almonihah flinched at the yell.


She's grief-stricken. No doubt her husband was one of those we were too late for,” Zrathanzon murmured to his pupil.


“Oh,” Almonihah replied, her words still ringing in his ears.


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This is the end of chapter 6. I hadn't really known about the whole section about the ice trolls until pretty recently, when Almonihah decided to inform me of just how good of a warrior Zrathanzon really was.


So, I guess this is my second fight scene. This one's a bit more detailed, as appropriate to Almonihah's greater age and faculties at this point in time. How do you think it turned out?

2 comments:

  1. I thought you did a good job weaving through the battle, a little play by play with some general actions to keep the pace mixed up and interesting. I do have to wonder if the ice trolls had attacked this village before, raids are usually done to the same places, and if so what kind of defense the villagers would have made before. Looking forward the rest of the story, keep it up.

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